I read all the papers but I did not leave comments on all of them. All of you need to check for style, spelling and grammar. Once again, read your paper out loud and you will hear the awkward phrasing and poorly chosen words that need to be changed.



Malacca Paper - London, McAleer, Meyers

Samaraqand - Brant, Doveala, Muellers

Samarkand - Gipson, Rinefierd, Solomon

Malacca - Amorosano, Hunter, Sengstaken

Malacca - Kinney, Saunders, Seymour

Damascus Paper - Manepalli, Restifo, Cosme

Samarkand- Joseph, LaMonica, Mierjeski

Damascus- Gibbons, McDermott